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 Falling from the Ground

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Love's Loser
Hatchling
Hatchling
Love's Loser


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Join date : 2010-04-16
Age : 32
Location : in an airplane under the ground

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PostSubject: Falling from the Ground   Falling from the Ground Icon_minitimeTue May 04, 2010 9:22 am
Its crazy livin ina world like this
Its pretty hard not to go insane
not pretty if you dnt comply
pretty easy if you dnt complain
You stand there like you dnt feel pain
No tears in the face of defeat
pretend to the end that you dnt feel change
dnt admit that your fate is this weak
dnt say that u feel like dyin
life's hard and it feels like diamonds
goin home jus far to gone
much to late to even like tryin
I cant understand what im sayin
I cant figure what im implyin
If you feelin u dnt wanna be alive
you feel jus how i am

My hearts been broke for awhile yours aint the one keepn me alive
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