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PostSubject: Dreams Come True   Dreams Come True Icon_minitimeSat Dec 05, 2009 2:38 pm
A/N: Totally redone from Faster, Harder...FIRE where it was loosly based on RangeMan, this is original and about Disneyland and blah blah blah, just read to find out but it's redone so yeah

Prologue

Everyday millions of people, children and adults alike, visit the Disney theme parks and pour all there wishes, dreams, imaginations, and minds towards everything that goes on in Disney. There dreams and aspirations become lodged into the parks and it makes them keep coming back for more. Everything that they see and hear becomes a memory and a hope for the future. What should happen to these dreams, do they disappear when the children, teens, and adults leave the park. The memories stay and create dreams which become further lodged into the dream world, where Disney gets its ideas from, but is there more to this world of dreams and wishes.

Disneyland, the happiest place on earth truly lived up to its name for the little girl who was visiting for the first time. She had no clue what was going to happen. She wasn’t afraid though. The girl saw everything and was amazed at all of it. She got to meet her favorite characters and other characters. Good and bad all over the place. The girl loved Fantasy land where she got to see all of her favorite her movies and right next to it was Toontown where there was characters and rides. New Orleans square was also a great place. Pirates of the Carribean and the Haunted Mansion, though she found the beginning a little scary, were fun to go on. She loved Splash Mountain, it was exhilarating and fun, her younger brother didn’t think so though.

She continued to watch and play as everything came to a close, the parade had her in awe and the fireworks even more so. All the people who worked there had smiles, sometimes frowns but it was more from boredom of doing something repetitive. When she got home there was one thing that stood in her mind, Disneyland. She had decided that she would one day work there. The happiest and most magical place on earth and even as she grew older she still loved the park, but it wasn’t her dream to work there for the rest of her life, however she still wanted to work there. Her younger self’s determination and love for the park would make sure of it. She would make sure of it as well. Who wouldn’t want to work in a place that you loved.
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